Rewrite

Rakhu, thanks for the rewrites. However, please keep in mind not to go too crazy with it. We have to keep the script down to at least 110 pages. I would really like it to be 90 pages however that may not be possible. I am looking at a 21 day shoot so if you divide that by the number of pages in the script you'll get an idea of what a typical shooting day is going to be like. Of course we should not limited ourselves but just understand that we may have to go back and trim it down. Thanks